Talk:Autarky - Revision history

Deleted User: /* Response to feedback */

2022-04-15T19:52:01Z

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			Great articles don't happen overnight. Your work is outstanding. Please keep it up! '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 19:52, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

JoseAntonioRespector: /* Response to feedback */

2022-04-15T19:47:42Z

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	Upon further examination of the previous work, I do agree that the tone needs to be changed.		Upon further examination of the previous work, I do agree that the tone needs to be changed.

	~~This~~ edit I believe should account for the tone issue and I have tried to make the tone more informative than persuasive/combative, although links and images are still lacking and the possibility for deficiencies in tone correction in the latest edit.		The recent edit I believe should account for the tone issue and I have tried to make the tone more informative than persuasive/combative, although links and images are still lacking and the possibility for deficiencies in tone correction in the latest edit.

	The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet. I could try though.		The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet. I could try though.

JoseAntonioRespector: /* Response to feedback */

2022-04-15T19:47:18Z

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	I believe I have tried to ~~correct for~~ tone ~~in this current edit of the article~~, although links and images are still lacking.		Upon further examination of the previous work, I do agree that the tone needs to be changed.

			This edit I believe should account for the tone issue and I have tried to make the tone more informative than persuasive/combative, although links and images are still lacking and the possibility for deficiencies in tone correction in the latest edit.

	The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet. I could try though.		The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet. I could try though.

JoseAntonioRespector: /* Response to feedback */

2022-04-15T19:41:30Z

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	I believe I have tried to correct for tone in this current edit of the article, although links and images are still lacking.		I believe I have tried to correct for tone in this current edit of the article, although links and images are still lacking.
	The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet.		The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet. I could try though.

	The latter two may take some time, also the content is still subject to revision because I believe the article will be stronger if examples of autarky can be provided. Friedrich List provides a good amount of ammunition in this regard, although this will have to wait until later.		The latter two may take some time, also the content is still subject to revision because I believe the article will be stronger if examples of autarky can be provided. Friedrich List provides a good amount of ammunition in this regard, although this will have to wait until later.

	[[User:JoseAntonioRespector\|JoseAntonioRespector]] ([[User talk:JoseAntonioRespector\|talk]]) 19:40, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		[[User:JoseAntonioRespector\|JoseAntonioRespector]] ([[User talk:JoseAntonioRespector\|talk]]) 19:40, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

JoseAntonioRespector: /* Response to feedback */ new section

2022-04-15T19:40:15Z

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	Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

			== Response to feedback ==

			I believe I have tried to correct for tone in this current edit of the article, although links and images are still lacking.
			The latter two is going to be difficult however, the former especially because I practically relied on the books that I have read and not so much links on the internet.

			The latter two may take some time, also the content is still subject to revision because I believe the article will be stronger if examples of autarky can be provided. Friedrich List provides a good amount of ammunition in this regard, although this will have to wait until later.

			[[User:JoseAntonioRespector\|JoseAntonioRespector]] ([[User talk:JoseAntonioRespector\|talk]]) 19:40, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Deleted User: /* First impression */

2022-04-15T08:45:36Z

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	Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

	Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		=====Update=====
			Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

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2022-04-15T08:44:29Z

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	Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

	Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

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	Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

	Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes ("<code><nowiki>~~'''[[User:Archangel\|<span style=~~"~~background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;~~">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:34, 15 April 2022 (UTC)</nowik></code>"), and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes <code><nowiki>"~~~~"</nowiki></code>, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

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	Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

	Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes ("<code><nowiki>'''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:34, 15 April 2022 (UTC)</nowik></code>"), and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

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	Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)		Really good article! Others will come along and make their own edits, corrections, etc. This is normal. Good stuff! Please keep it up! Also, do not be afraid to edit other articles not started by you, this is normal. '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 07:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

			Update: Ok, I took a REAL good look. Some constructive critisism; it needs images, it needs links. The tone of the article moves in and out of being truly encyclopedic. I do this too, as does everyone. Just try to keep your passions in check. I know its hard when the other side is so blatant, but we are better than they are so do your best. Aga8n, I do it too. If you respond to this, remember to sign with four tildes, and your signature and date will automagically appear :) '''[[User:Archangel\|<span style="background:#000000; color:white; padding:1px;">𝘼</span><span style="background:#000033; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙧</span><span style="background:#000055; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙘</span><span style="background:#000088; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙝</span>]][[User talk:Archangel\|<span style="background:#0000aa; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙖</span><span style="background:#0000bb; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙣</span><span style="background:#0000cc; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙜</span><span style="background:#0000ee; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙚</span><span style="background:#0000ff; color:white; padding:1px;">𝙡</span>]]''' 08:32, 15 April 2022 (UTC)